Throughout this grand pattern of things you actually receive a B- just for effort. Where exactly you lost me ended up being in all the particulars. As they say, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be much more true at this point. Having said that, let me reveal to you what exactly did work. Your text can be highly engaging and this is probably the reason why I am taking an effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, while I can notice the jumps in logic you make, I am not really confident of how you seem to connect the ideas which in turn produce the conclusion. For right now I shall subscribe to your point but wish in the near future you link the facts much better.