In the awesome pattern of things you actually receive a B- with regard to hard work. Exactly where you confused everybody ended up being on your details. As people say, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be more correct in this article. Having said that, allow me say to you just what did work. The article (parts of it) is really persuasive and that is probably why I am taking an effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, despite the fact that I can certainly notice the leaps in reason you make, I am not necessarily convinced of just how you appear to connect the ideas which in turn produce the conclusion. For now I shall yield to your point but hope in the near future you actually link the facts much better.