In this awesome scheme of things you actually receive a B- with regard to effort. Where exactly you actually lost us was first in your facts. As they say, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more correct here. Having said that, permit me say to you just what exactly did do the job. The text can be highly persuasive and that is most likely the reason why I am taking the effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, while I can certainly notice a leaps in logic you come up with, I am not sure of exactly how you seem to unite your points that produce the actual conclusion. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your point but wish in the future you actually connect the dots better.