I think that what you posted was very reasonable. But, think about this, suppose you typed a catchier title? I mean, I don't wish to tell you how to run your website, but suppose you added something that grabbed people's attention? I mean blog topic is a little plain. You should peek at Yahoo's home page and watch how they create news headlines to grab viewers interested. You might try adding a video or a related pic or two to grab readers excited about what you've written. In my opinion, it could make your blog a little bit more interesting.